public asked to check on children

the title of my article is public asked to check on children

Summary:
A government strategy says children’s safe is fundamental to their happiness and school result. Now government should build new system for approving venues to cut down organize school trip. The government must address from two issues. The first one is children often fear of reprisal. Lot of children and young people told to author that they don’t feel save when they hang out with their friends. Most of parents would like to protect their children and intervene when he found their children in danger. But expert say that adult should interne reservation. Because they might mistreat other children and it might cause their children be revenged. The other thing is the trip that learning outside. The author mentions about recently when teacher take children learning outside, they try to make more and more security. These teacher will hope the guide from new government will help them are less likely to be sued.

Opinion:
My opinion is that children’s safe is really important. Because they are too young to protect themselves. So the government should do more guides about how to protect children. Especially they might suffer revenge from their friends in school or after school. The revenge from friend is very common situation everywhere and it is the hardest to prevent than other situation. So if government could take something new guide to avert these things, it will be most effective way for children’s safety. Beside it also talks about learning outside. There are lots of different kinds of accidents during travel outside such as car accident. It is really hard to prevent these things. We all know that things in red type will be less effective. This situation is very serious situation in Taiwan. There are lots of news about it. I think if the government in Taiwan also can build new system for children, it will be really good thing for every parents.

posted by Bea